We finished our short script for The 2006 Screenwriter's Challenge and turned it in July 28th. The winners will not be announced until September 12th....the wait is killing me! The way the contest works is we were given a genre and a subject and then had 1 week to turn in a short script (20 pgs max). Our genre and subject was Drama and Soldiers. Our script is title "As You Were" and is the story of a retired Army Colonel that rallys injured troops in a VA hospital, and in doing so finds purpose at the end of his career.
I posted the script on the Screenwriter's Challange message board and we have received really good feedback from the other entrants. So far our script has been viewed 187 times and we've received 16 very positive comments like -
"You have a very beautiful story here. I think it is structured perfectly and I love the character of the Colonel."
"Being a soldier myself, I had to read this. I liked it. I totally understood where the Colonel was coming from. If you don't have a military background, you wouldn't know it from reading this short. The Colonel's character was a spot on depiction of a career military man who doesn't know how to do anything else but be a soldier. I've known many of these men."
"Your story moved me. My grandfather was a Colonel and it was hard for him to leave that life behind. You captured the feeling wondefully. Nicely done."
"I thought you did a great job with the pace of the story, it was moving and well done. "
"Overall a top notch script nailing both, genre and theme."
Naturally these great comment just make the wait all the more unbearable. Especially in our heat we are competing against 17 other writers and so far only 6 have posted their scripts to the message board so there are still 11 out there that I haven't read. Did I mention the wait is killing me?? Only 26 more days!!!
Oh well there's a bunch of other things going on. The month of September is going to be busy!!!
The first weekend we're going to visit my mom and go to Silverwood! The following weekend my sister is coming to town and we're walking 5 miles in the PAWS walk...for which I've raised $200. If you would like to donate Click Here!! Also that weekend I have a script pitch and pre-production meeting for another short our production company, 50 Prime Studios (formerly Count It! Productions), will be shooting the end of the Septemeber. The weekend of the 15th and 16th C will be in Las Vegas...lucky bastard! Then the 23rd we're going to see Elton John. Then the last weekend I'll be shooting as mentioned above.
Did I mention school starts the 18th?!?!?! Oh well, looks like October is going to pretty low key. Then on to November which is already shaping up to be busy. The first weekend is our annual company party and then next weekend we're leaving for California to see Barbra Streisand and then might have a weekend rest and then we're smack into the holidays....Uh where did 2006 go??
That's about it for now.
